FYI:
usually I read your chapters are soon as you post them, but now I've decided that I'm not going to read them. instead, I'm going to wait till they're all done, so I can read the whole thing like a book (cause it is). and I can read them one at a time, which will be good cause I often get confused one what's happening in all of them! :)
4.
someone's birthday
use the line 'she was tiny'
include earbuds
include a cute pet
include a hoodie
light and darkness
-celia-
Yay! I am so exited for this one!!!!! ;)
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-Lizzie
Aww! Thanks! Your blog is super cool! :)
DeleteWhat does light and darkness mean? Just wondering :) Is it like, include scenes with night and day? Or include the words light and darkness?
ReplyDeleteJust looking for clarification :)
Also, I hope you don't mind, but in Chapter Three, as it's written in the third person, I changed "I forgot how to breathe." to "He forgot how to breathe."
I really hope that's okay! :)
xoxo,
Bethan
Light and darkness can mean be whatever you want. You can include the words, or light and darkness, or just use it to describe something. Sorry if that was confusing!
DeleteOh, and He forgot to breath is perfectly fine! :)
DeleteAhh, okay, thank you! Don't worry, I know what you mean now :)
DeleteOh, good!
I'm loving the challenge so far - it's sooooooo much fun!
xoxo,
Bethan
I've done chapter four!
ReplyDeletexoxo,
Bethan
I did mine! :)
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xo,
-Anna <3
Here is the 4th chapter! :D
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