Thursday

And we danced.



I slammed the door in their faces, and stormed down the hallway.

My heart was ablaze with fire.
The kind they like to call anger.
My head was buzzing with the terrible conversation.
Yelling rang in my ears.
 I looked down and saw that my hand was balled into a tight fist.

I hit the wall nearest to me.
Hard.
My fist was bleeding now.
The fire in my heart had died down to a glowing cole.
Still burning though.
It was unbearable.

I was tired.
I just wanted to sleep.
To get away.
To escape my life for awhile, and just live in peace for once.

I found that my feet had taken me farther down the lonely hall.
All was silent and still.

I turned to enter an open room.
I stopped before I even went through the doorway. 

Music.
Upbeat.
But insanely quiet.
It was coming from and iPod rested against a wall.

She was dancing.

Her unseeing eye closed, taking in the moment.
She spun slowly around the room.

The music filled her soul.

She was floating.

I was floating.

I found me self being filled with the rhythm.
I found all my problems floating away.
I found the fire in my heart floating out the fire exit.

I called out to her.
She looked my way.

She smiled.

Her smile lite up my world.
Now my heart was ablaze with fire.
Again.
This time with the kind they like to call...

Love.

And we danced.


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 FYI, this is written from the point of view of me main 
charecter of the book I'm writing. He's a guy. Just 
thought I should let you know. :) 

What did you think of it? I'd love to hear your thoughts! 

-celia-


14 comments:

  1. Aaahhh!! This... *sniffs* is so flawlessly beautiful!!! Asdfghjkl! < Alright... I had no way of explaining how I felt, so there it was.

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    1. Aww! Thanks! Your so sweet! Up you made me day! :)

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  2. Oh my gosh, this is so beautiful!!! So so good. You are just so talented! <3

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  3. That was beautiful. And it's really cool that you're writing a book from the prospective of a guy! I'd like to try that but I'm not as dauntless as you are. {dauntless *sniff sniff*}

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  4. That was beautiful! You write so well!

    http://climbingthroughtomorrow.blogspot.in/

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  5. At first I thought he was a girl. I was like whhhhhat?! But now it makes a lot more sense. Your writing is flawless! You have a true gift!

    http://eveofwomanhood.blogspot.com/

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  6. Love it! :) your a great writer! :) I love the girls outfit in the picture!

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  7. Oh. My. Gosh. That's so beautiful! I love love love it!
    And yea at first I thought it was a girl, and I was like, "ooookaaay then". xD lol :)
    But I love it, it's awesome! :)

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    1. I know! Same here! I was like, "Wow, this girl has anger issues." ;)

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  8. Agreed! I also thought it was a girl at first too! Lol! ;)

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